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Short Story

If you see a falling star...
"Transferred." Nilu watched Asitha walk towards her, waving a letter in his hands. She was seated in the front portico of their bungalow in Honeycomb Estate, Lindula. "Transferred."

Nilu's heart skipped a beat. Her worst fears had come true. Asitha would have to leave Honeycomb and settle down in Brook's Estate - an old isolated bungalow three hours from Badulla town. Nilu looked at the beautiful surroundings facing her and sighed. She loved this house. She had lived in it for three years as Asitha's wife. But now things were going to change. "This is the life of a planter," Asitha had told her when the rumours about "transfers" had begun. "You have to be ready to move whenever the management decides it's time for a change." And now, the dreaded change had come.

Nilu tried not to cry when she saw her new home - a square, two storied building, built by a British planter called Robert Brook, 102 years ago (she had calculated the age from the date carved on the central fireplace). Robert Brook had chosen a spot far from the factory to build his house, but built it in such a way that the factory filled the view from the sitting room and the master bedroom. Nilu could almost imagine the burly planter, smoking a pipe and reclining in an easy chair in the sitting room gazing with pride at the smoke coming from the chimney of his factory. He had ensured that the first thing he would see in the morning from his bed would also be the factory.

The sun refused to come out on the day Asitha and Nilu moved into their new house. This was July; the monsoons had come in maximum force. The howling wind, the non-stop drizzle and the mist created a dark, brooding, atmosphere in the house. Depression seemed to reign in every nook and corner.

Nilu's mind filled with fear. She recollected what her friends had said about the bungalow when they had heard of Asitha's transfer. The house had a reputation for bad luck. "A moosala place," was how one friend had described it.

Everybody believed there was a ghost in the bungalow. The last of the descendants of Robert Brook called Dryson Brook had committed suicide when his wife had eloped with a planter in Badulla. He had shot himself in the cloakroom. The bullet, which pierced his skull, had gone through the staircase and through the ceiling. The marks of the bullet hole were constant reminders of his tragic death. It seemed as though the sense of sorrow, dejection and depression that had driven him to take his life, still pervaded the bungalow.

Lying awake at night in their still unfamiliar bedroom, Nilu had wondered what bad luck would befall them. So far her life with Asitha had been marvellous. Even though they had totally different interests, she, a lawyer, he, a burly ex-ruggerite, they got on unusually well together. Now, Nilu wondered if things would change. Would Asitha run away with one of the sophisticated female auditors who came from Colombo to visit the factory?

Then she began to worry about her parents, her brother and sister-in-law, her favourite teachers... about everybody she loved. Would something happen to them? What ill-fate did the house hold for all of them?

As the night stretched on, Nilu fell into the deepest depths of depression.

She curled herself into a ball and went to sleep wishing she would never wake up.

But she did, wake up, wake up from a dream in which the house had looked different. In her dream, the gloomy, dilapidated rooms had been filled with sunshine. There were flowers on the tables, lovely cheerful pictures on the walls, and soft music. Everywhere there prevailed a sense of love and joy.

In her dream she saw her parents-in-law seated in the sitting room. Nilu hardly knew them for, two months after she had married Asitha, they had migrated to the States to live with Asitha's sister. In her dream she found herself loving them as much as she loved her father and mother.

She wished her dream would be real when she woke up. But nothing had changed. The house remained as awful as it had been yesterday, when they had moved in. Then, at 6.30 in the morning came the telephone call for Asitha. Asitha's father was at the other end of the line. He was telling Asitha, that he and Asitha's mother would be flying home for a month's vacation when they got the summer holidays.

Nilu's eyes popped out when Asitha conveyed the news to her. The last part of her dream was going to come true. Then it struck her that if she tried, she could make the first part come true as well. With clenched fists she vowed to prove to everybody who had spoken ill of the house that they were wrong, that her house would bring nothing but good luck.

From then on, Nilu worked hard, harder than she had ever worked in all her life. She cleaned and scrubbed and polished and tried to change the gloomy atmosphere. She nagged Asitha about paint and bathroom fittings and plumbers and carpenters. She hung a painting of the Buddha at the entrance of the house. She wanted the calm serenity on the face of the Buddha to prevail all over the house. Her mother and brother gifted her two beautiful paintings. Her father bought her a radio. One of her best friends stitched a wall hanging, especially for the sitting room.

Gradually, the house began to look like what it had been in her dream. As she worked, listening to the music on the radio, Nilu realised she was enjoying herself. She even liked the strange sounds she heard as she worked.

Footsteps on the stairs, the sense of somebody moving in the next room.

"That's Dryson Brook," Nilu told herself.

And as the days passed, she began to feel he was her friend. She called him Mr. Brooke or Brooky according to the mood she was in, and had imaginary conversations with him. As Asitha was away during the daytime, she found her residential ghost a lovely companion.

After days and days of rain, the sun decided to make an appearance on the day Asitha's parents arrived at the bungalow. Nilu realised she need not have feared her in-laws. They took Nilu into their midst as if Nilu was one of their own daughters. As Nilu sat in the sitting room listening to their tales about life in New York, she realised she was living her dream.

That night she stood with Asitha on the balcony gazing into the mountains.

The lights of the factory glittered in the distance. Nilu turned her head towards the sky and asked Asitha, "What would you do if you saw a falling star right now?" Asitha did not reply immediately. He remained silent for almost a minute. Then he turned towards Nilu, gathered her into his arms and said in a low, gentle voice "Nothing. I don't have anything to wish for."


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